Showing posts with label Week 2. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 2. Show all posts

Monday, January 30, 2017

Feedback Thoughts: Week 2

Image Information: photo regarding feedback. Web Source: pixabay.

I read the following articles regarding getting feedback:

From these articles, I took away that feedback can often make us uncomfortable but it has the ability to help us to grow if we let it. Everyone has room to grow. When someone gives us feedback, they are not insulting the individual person but they are trying to help them realize possible things they can improve on. With the use of mindfulness and self-compassion we can react to feedback in a positive way. When we are confronted with harsh feedback we need to allow ourselves to be upset. We must also not demonize the person that give us negative feedback. We also need to determine which feedback we should act on and which feedback we should ignore.

I read the following articles regarding giving feedback:


From these articles, I took away that Feedforward is a beneficial way to give people feedback in a more positive way. Feedforward focuses on giving people suggestions on how to improve in the future rather than just showing them how they were wrong. We can also use feedback as a way to communicate to someone how they are doing without any judgment. Focus on your feedback as having a potential to help someone grow.




Thursday, January 26, 2017

Week 2 Storytelling: The Old Man and Death

The Old Man and Death

An old labourer, bent double with age and toil, was gathering sticks in a forest. At last he grew so tired and hopeless that he threw down the bundle of sticks, and cried out: "I cannot bear this life any longer. Ah, I wish Death would only come and take me!"

As he spoke, Death, a grisly skeleton, appeared and said to him: "What wouldst thou, Mortal? I heard thee call me."

"Please, sir," replied the woodcutter, "would you kindly help me to lift this faggot of sticks on to my shoulder?"

We would often be sorry if our wishes were gratified.



Image Information: a photo with the title of the story. Web Source: Wikimedia Commons.

There was once an old labourer who live on the countryside. The man owned a large farm in which he had much cattle and crops among many other resources that contributed to his success. He had a beautiful family and an all around beautiful life. Many would consider him to be a lucky man that gets everything for which he wishes.

"Please, let me have a bountiful harvest this year," the old labourer requested. And just like that his wish was granted. That year he produced the biggest harvest he had ever produced in his lifetime. The man had gotten used to all of his success and did not seem to mind receiving everything for which he wished.

The old man was not just simply a farmer. He also worked in the forest nearby his cottage to gather wood to sell for firewood. The man had done this task since he was just a young boy; every single day, the man would trek out to the forest.

One day, the old man was working in the woods just as he had all the days of his life. He worked in the forest his entire life chopping down trees for firewood and gathering sticks. His job was hard work and the labor had started to grow hard on him over the years. As his body grew old and tired, he could feel his work becoming more difficult.

After many long hours in the field one afternoon, the old man grew so tired and hopeless that he threw down the bundle of sticks he was holding, and cried out: "I cannot bear this life any longer. Ah, I wish Death would only come and take me!"

As soon as his words left his mouth, Death appeared before him. He had never met Death before but it was always what he imagined it would be. Death was dark and a mere grisly skeleton. Finally, Death spoke to the man and said: "What wouldst thou, Mortal? I heard thee call me."

The old man replied, "Why, yes! Would you kindly help me to lift this faggot of sticks on to my shoulder?"

Death responded, "No, for you have called my name and anyone who calls my name must come with me."

"I was only exaggerating," pleaded the woodcutter, "I love my life and do not wish for you to take me from my family and loved ones!"

"If you love your life then you should have made sure not to mention my name," said Death.

The man responded "Yes, I shall be sure to never say thy name in the future until I am ready to leave this earth and join you."

"My name has already been said," replied Death, "I must take you with me now and let you be a lesson to teach others to be careful for what they wish."

And before the old man could say another word, Death whisked him away; never to be seen again.

How sorry would we be if ALL of our wishes were gratified.

Author's Note: The original story was about an old labourer who does his work in the woods picking up sticks. One day, he grows very tired and wishes that Death would take him. However, when Death greets him, he simply asks for help doing his work. The moral of the story is that we should be careful what we wish for because it may be terribly bad if we get what we want. I decided to stick with the main theme of the story but add a plot twist where Death still decides to take the old man anyway. I also added in some more background to the man's life and added in the fact that he was used to reaping positive benefits as a result of his wishes.

Bibliography: The original story is titled "The Old Man and Death" and is found in the book Aesop's Fables (Jacobs).  

Wednesday, January 25, 2017

Reading Notes: Aesop's Fables (Jacobs), Part B

Jacobs 58. The Labourer and the Nightingale (Perry 627):

I like the cleverness of the Nightingale in this story. I like how the nightingale promises something to the man holding her captive. I could retell the story with different characters. Perhaps with a fox as the one holding someone captive or the one being held captive.

Jacobs 36. The Ant and the Grasshopper (Perry 373):

I like the theme of this story. I like that hard work pays off for the ant and laziness and procrastination leads to the grasshopper's ruin.

Jacobs 17. The Woodman and the Serpent (Perry 176):

I like this story because it shows that the snake never changes. Unlike some characters I have seen so far, the snake is an evil creature and even someone saving his life will not change him.

Image Information: illustration for the man and the snake. Web Source.

Jacobs 29. The Belly and the Members (Perry 130):

I thought this story was really interesting. I have never heard a story about the parts of a body talking to each other. I could write a story with the theme of working together as a necessity.

Jacobs 54. Avaricious and Envious (Perry 580):

I like this story because it shows that people are going to be ungrateful and envious of others no matter what they have. I could write about the theme of envy in another way.

Jacobs 69. The Old Man and Death (Perry 60):

I liked the last line of this story "We would often be sorry if our wishes were gratified." I could write a plot twist in that the man tries to ask death for his help but death tells him he must take his life since he wished it.

Jacobs 50. The Two Fellows and the Bear (Perry 65):

I like the moral of this story in that you should never trust a friend who deserts you in a pinch. I could write about another scenario with the same theme/moral.

Aesop's Fables by Joseph Jacobs; link to the reading online.

Tuesday, January 24, 2017

Reading Notes: Aesop's Fables (Jacobs), Part A

The Characters That Stood Out:

Lions

I like the role of the lion in the noble/defeated aspect. In the story with the argument about whether a man or lion is stronger, I could reverse the roles. I also like to see how the fox plays a role in many of the stories. He is also usually the one to realize that the Lion in lying to or trying to trick them. 

Foxes

I like the idea of the trickster fox having the table turned on him and being tricked back. I also like the moral of the story of "The Fox and The Grapes" that it is easy to despise what you cannot get. I also like the story about "The Fox and The Mosquitoes." It has been applied to politicians but I could maybe apply the moral of the story to something else or maybe I could rewrite the story and apply it to politicians in my own way. Distrust interested advice is the theme for "A Fox Without a Tail." I could maybe keep the theme but with different characters.

Wolves

I like the qualities of the character of the wolf. He is almost like a lion and fox mixed together. Like the wolf in "The Wolf in Sheep's Clothing" I like the idea of the wolf using trickery to gain his meals. I could write a story in which the wolf uses another form of trickery to disguise himself in order to gain a meal.

Dogs and Cats

I like the character of the dog because he is greedy and selfish which can be freely and easily written into a story. The cat on the other hand, is single-minded but often to the benefit of the cat. The cat can focus on one thing and is rather self-aware. I could write a story about how the cat's focus leads him to defeat the dog or gain something that the dog wants.

Image Information: rivalry between a cat and dog. Web Source: Wikimedia Commons

Bibliography: Aesop's Fables by Joseph Jacobs; link to the reading online.